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[lyrics] Through The Skies For You
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Author:  blue7floyd [ Mon Feb 24, 2014 1:17 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: [lyrics] Through The Skies For You

Comparing the eyes to both sunrise and darkness seems to be very awkward. It gives two opposite meanings for the same thing. I love the way you have expressed the love towards her through the poem and really make the readers feel it.





Thanks

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