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I've continually had a liking for the mystical, but it wasn't until I matured a little iota that I discovered John Maus!
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 24, 2014 1:17 pm 
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Comparing the eyes to both sunrise and darkness seems to be very awkward. It gives two opposite meanings for the same thing. I love the way you have expressed the love towards her through the poem and really make the readers feel it.





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